tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4726509511902928852.post9074231168447449551..comments2024-03-14T08:10:39.133-07:00Comments on Tending Our Gardens: I Remember a Boy...Jennie Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14221463685456902500noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4726509511902928852.post-69127997924781245932013-10-23T18:33:53.045-07:002013-10-23T18:33:53.045-07:00I really enjoyed it, Mom! It is well told, it rea...I really enjoyed it, Mom! It is well told, it really held my interest. I'm a little aghast that you threw poor Bill's hat out of the truck and he didn't get it back! I liked how you said he wore it "jammed down." It sure is fun that I can picture just where you did all of this and that I picked berries in the same area for pay when I was young. It must have been so fun to be with your cousins for the entire summer. I like how you brought Larry into the story as a focal point to draw several descriptive scenes together. :-) Great post!Peter Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07169921605180545217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4726509511902928852.post-16854361033293843612013-10-22T09:58:41.495-07:002013-10-22T09:58:41.495-07:00Hi, Mom... I liked this one a lot. I liked that ...Hi, Mom... I liked this one a lot. I liked that you added the bit about Grandpa staying in the city to work, while you spent your summers on the farm. It helps to give a clearer picture of your family dynamic, and back story for the tales of your youth. Overall, very nicely done! <br /><br />JoAnnAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com